Postcards Feedback Notes


  • Feedback to Dong Yoon:

    • 1. Images are connected to each other. Working really nice.
    2. Use the negative space to put the text. (the vertical layout is working well)
    3. Move the text a bit so they don’t go over the busy image
    4. Type smaller- image is big so make the contrast
    5. Reduce the space between lines (line height)


  • Feedback from Dongyoon:

    • 1. font color works really well.
    2. For the second images, since the color on the bottom has strong red, so maybe use similiar red color.
    3. Possibly to have darker shadow behind the text.
    4. For the last image, maybe try to move the text so that it is clear who is saying the quotes.